Erotic Problems In Space_Additional

A one page synopsis exists.


Comments from Papatango reader, 11/08/2020:

Thank you for the opportunity to read your play, an amusing futuristic space thriller. You have imagined the world of the play in clever detail, and handle the plot twists with panache and humour. However, although Andrei and Harriet are necessarily predictable since they’re programmed that way, this does mean that some potential for emotional investment in them as characters is lost. Chris and Kelvin’s dialogue is also often a tad expositional – sometimes they explain the situation to each other when it seems fairly obvious already, so it sounds a bit forced. Some work on these elements might help to clear space for the enjoyable action to move with greater momentum. We wish you all the best developing this script.